In terms of movies—I’m an aspiring screenwriter as I’m sure many on this forum are writers hunting and pecking to be published or gain entrance into the literary halls—but after reading enough Elmore Leonard (All of his books except TOUCH, which i just bought) I have come to understand one thing I love about Leonard, but can never really be done or put across in cinema—and that is the wonderful “personal” inner thoughts of characters who have put together this great scheme and at the end of the book—as they wade into their final seconds on this planet—say something like “Wait now—” Bam! Or “Hey Shit—” Bam! Or the famous inner thoughts narrative Mr. Leonard has used on a number of times (my favorite being UNKNOWN MAN NUMBER #89 PRONTO & CUBA LIBRE) in which the character is dying, wishing he could do it all over again! How things just go wrong for the bad guy no matter how well he has planned something. I dunno if I’m just an idiot—but I laugh my ass off when I read passages like the following—
It sounded like ... It was, a horse coming, Christ, running hard, cutting through the trees, those big leaves waving, breaking and there he was, the cowboy on the dun coming right at him. Osma extended the Mauser, wanting so bad to shoot him, but in that moment saw the revolver pointing at him, saw the smoke burst from the muzzle as it fired and felt himself punched in the chest so hard he took a step back, still on his feet as the dun rode him down, slammed him flat on his back to lie in the dead leaves. Now he was looking at the green ones hanging over him and part of the sky , not knowing how this could have happened. He said to himself, I was ready. Wasn’t I ready? I was watching ...
Classic Leonard. It never gets old and it has the terse style of Hemingway—but something more and better….Humanity—regret, humor—life.