In the 70’s, Kathy Werbelow, a Detroit Free Press reviewer said that Elmore’s male characters, and therefore by association, Elmore, wrote women with the sensitivity of Mickey Spiillane. It’s true of a lot of male writers back then who wised up and stopped being quite so sexist and started seriously developig their female characters. Elmore didn’t exactly agree with Kathy but he realized that if he were perceived as chauvinistic by critics like her, he might want to take another look at his stuff, and he did.
In the 80s, Elmore realized tha he could write women pretty much the same as men, changing only the “business.” The results are seen in some of his best books that have strong female lead charactes like Carmen in Killshot, Kathy Baker in Maximum Bob, Jackie Burke in Rum Punch, Karen Sisco in Out of Sight and Debbie Dewey in Pagan Babies.
Up in Honey’s Room is so tipped toward the femal lead, Honey Deal, that Elmore jockingly calls it “chick lit.”